2016年5月2日 星期一
Compare and contrast: Snow White and Cinderella
Compare and contrast: Snow White and Cinderella
Today, I heard about the story of Snow White and Cinderella, I think the story is interesting, so I want to share it with you.
Both of Snow White and Cinderella are princess, their fantastic life are ruined by the bad queen and her mother who didn't bore her. Snow white was living in his castle, but her mother, queen didn't like her. Queen think she is the most beautiful lady in the world, so she wanted to killed her. However, Snow White was still live. Snow White was helped by seven short men. After queen knew it, the bad queen gave Snow White an toxic apple. Snow White ate it and became dead. Finally, there came a prince to save her, killed the bad queen, Snow White married the prince.
Cinderella was not lovely, she was bullied by her three sisters and her mother, they didn't like Cinderella. When they went out home, they would required Cinderella clean the house, and did all the house work. A god saw it, and decided to help her. The god made a suit for her to go the the party in the castle. Once, Cinderella lost her glasses shoes it the party. The prince love Cinderella, he wanted to find the master of the shoes. Finally, he found Cinderella, and married her, a happy ending.
The similarity of two stories is two princesses were unfortunate before, they were hated by their families. However, they were helped by the others, and get married with prince, lived the happy life. The different place is before Cinderella got the help from the others, she tried to help herself.
Both of two princess are bullied by the queen or their families, it was very sad. However, their all became a happy ending, lived a fantastic live.
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I think you write a great essay.
回覆刪除hey I saw some wrong-spelling words, and mistake in the grammar. btw, line 3 in the second paragraph snow white is living in 'her' castle.
回覆刪除I think it's a good composition. But I think there are still some little mistakes need to be revised, like the sentence structure. There are many sentence written behind the command without conjunction like " and " or " or ", either conjunction or dot, you have to choose one. I think it would be better.
回覆刪除I think it's a good composition. But I think there are still some little mistakes need to be revised, like the sentence structure. There are many sentence written behind the command without conjunction like " and " or " or ", either conjunction or dot, you have to choose one. I think it would be better.
回覆刪除In fact, Cinderella was a civilian at first and after she marry the prince, she became a princess .
回覆刪除I think it is an easy reading essay. You write clearly.
I think Cinderella is not a princess. she is a normal girl who married prince.
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